Poetry..What does this do for you?

I would give a million Sundays..to be with you just one Monday.

In your eyes, I see every part of me..

Your smile reminds be of bicycles with training wheels.

The times of when there was no pain to heal.


My heart is beating in my ears..

Where do I go from here?

If you died, I would die too..

in fact..I'd like to.

3-14, I was born..but didn't live til I met you.

I was given lies before, but what you gave me was true.

The line that really stands out for me:

Your smile reminds me of bicycles with training wheels.

That specific detail says so much. It is easily your best line.

Sound like you have loved and cared for someone special for a very long time, have you told this person that u like them, if not i think you should, if u haven't what obsticals will come in your way to get that through to them, and how will you overcome these obsticals. that good enough interpretation for best answer!

I'm sorry dear but that is crap.
The best poetry comes in the form of music lyrics.
Your boyfriend may enjoy it but poetry is for people who can't write a novel.
Don't take this personally, I think all poetry is crap.

:')

That was beautiful, man!

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Doesn't hang together...a lot of separate thoughts...the Sunday, Monday thing you could do without..and the bicycle one too. Think you can do better....

it could a good song